Mia: Your essay is good with a lot of information. I like how the introduction has some background on Huxley.
Ian: I think that your thesis is strong.
Lesther: I like how you use thinkers because it refers to thinkers in the past, present, and the future.
Kylie: I like how you compare your ideas to today's society.
The essays that I read are well written and have good information. In the essays I discovered that they each have a comparison to Brave New World and today's world. I thought that was good while proving there points. I also compared today;s society with Brave New Worlds society.
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